The writer’s adage of “show don’t tell” suggests telling is less effective in presenting a story than showing; however, great storytellers do both. Let’s explore how we lure readers into our story to enjoy our fictional dream through balancing show and tell. Show Showing slows down the pace to immerse the reader in a detailed sensual and emotional experience. Readers will ignore a full bladder, an empty stomach, and the need for sleep for the unique thrill of being in … Read More »

One, and done should not be the case for many poems. Why waste such a wealthy resource as a poem by only publishing it once in its entirety, or reprinting it whole? The truth is, like any good non-fiction writer who mines their research and articles for possible other perspectives on the material—poets can do the same. If you’ve got a longer poem, is it possible to pull out bits and pieces of it for a micro-poem? Can you reword … Read More »

Let us all bow down to the caring souls who slog through our unedited early drafts. And then let us ignore them. Maybe. I used to think that if only one or two people didn’t like something in my writing, I could ignore them. My rule-of-thumb was “three” for a manuscript change. The problem is, there’s no way to know what that critical mass (pun intended) actually is, so it’s important to pay attention to every critic, every beta-reader, every … Read More »

There are so many senses in which to immerse readers, and color plays a huge role in getting readers to feel like they’re right there in your story. In order to get the most out of each visual description, bust out that color palette and have some fun! Go Beyond the Obvious Sure, her dress was red, but would readers’ perception and attitude toward the character change if the dress was crimson or scarlet? Cherry red or garnet? Color can … Read More »

Disclaimer: I am aware that some of the suggestions in this post may not be possible for everyone, depending upon an individual’s physical condition, financial situation, and level of daring, but there may be some things here that writers haven’t thought of or didn’t know existed. Imagination Is Great. Reality Is Better. Do you dream of being your characters? I definitely do. I’m not strong or athletic or agile. I don’t live on an alien world surrounded by strange landscapes. … Read More »

Amazon has just come out with Vella, a new format for e-novels: the buy-by-the-episode serial. For readers, it’s less awkward than it sounds logistically, and the serial novel has a long pedigree stretching back at least into the nineteenth century. For writers, it’s a whole new adventure. I’ve just wet my toes as a serial writer and thought I’d share some reflections with anyone who’s interested in being part of this new market. Pitch ‘Em Right The best-selling genres seem … Read More »